Need urgent advice on this clip

[ZviT]

HI!

I am making a few minute clip of twins that have a Bar-Mitzvah soon and one plays basketball and one plays soccer. This clip will be shown at the Bar Mitzvah to 500 guests so that's why I want your opinion... I've only done weddings and events and this is my first clip.

I'm not making a movie for Hollywood, but I want it to be nice!

The first half will be the Basketball kid and the second half will be the soccer kid. I only did the first half so far and uploaded it for you to see before I continue.

Please give me your opinion on things that might need changing:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=8eZrUKPlfrU

Thanks!

[manono]

Hi-

I watched about half of it. Everything I've ever seen on YouTube looks like garbage I'd be ashamed to show to anyone, so I hope what you plan on showing to the 500 guests looks better than that. Maybe you had to deinterlace it for YouTube, and I don't know if you have deinterlaced the "real thing" for the showing, but since I saw line jitter from time to time across the top, I'd either use a better deinterlacer or wouldn't deinterlace at all, depending on what format the final video is in and how it'll be shown. If DVD to be shown on TV monitors, I'd definitely leave it interlaced.

Other than that, it looks real professional, and I respect the amount of work you obviously put into it. But I'm no expert on homemade videos, and there are some real pros around here that will be able to give you more educated opinions.

[ZviT]

Thanks for the reply.

No worry about the quality... I reduced the quality a lot for YouTube. The original will be top quality. It was more about the content I was asking about, so thanks!

[ZviT]

ok guys! Thanks for the advice!

I made a final version of both kids mixed. Please tell me what can be done to make it better... the clip needs to be shown on July 31st!

p.s. don't mind the quality... I reduced it to upload it to YouTube.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=T5c0DFDh6bE

Thanks!