Critique my 2d animation ( explainer video)

[khazha]

Hi, I have been making 2d explainer videos for about a month but they are kinda bad, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yF3ycVPHp7g

What can i do to improve it? How can I improve it? Please critique it

[Selur]

Way too many (fast) movements, most people will not really listen since they are occupied trying to spot all the animations.

[smrpix]

Basically nice visuals.

However, Your visuals and your audio overlap in conflicting ways. Rather than trying to explain it, I banged out a rough version that plays more naturally rythmically to demonstrate.
Your picture of the typewriter near the end is weak compared to the other parts. (IMHO)
You should probably mention again at the end that it's a resume service. For a half a moment I thought you also offerred suit pressing.

very close.

[khazha]

Basically nice visuals.

However, Your visuals and your audio overlap in conflicting ways. Rather than trying to explain it, I banged out a rough version that plays more naturally rythmically to demonstrate.
Your picture of the typewriter near the end is weak compared to the other parts. (IMHO)
You should probably mention again at the end that it's a resume service. For a half a moment I thought you also offerred suit pressing.

very close.

Wow. thank you very much for taking the time to make a video, it helps a lot! I will consider what you said and I will (try) implement what I learned in the next video. Cheers