How to make my audio flow

[dhunt17]

I'm more into the story telling and visual part of movie making and not so good at the audio part. Any tips to make my audio flow smoother?

http://www.vimeo.com/24886929

[redwudz]

Edit

[Baldrick]

I deleted your other thread. Continue in this one.

[lordsmurf]

You asked for feedback in the other thread. Here it is:

- Great camera work, nice and steady, lots of cuts and good use of vantages (few good angles, too)
- Excellent audio choice.
- Did not understand or particularly like the ending. After the knife was drawn, it was rushed and made little sense.
- From technical stance, the aspect ratio is messed up, too squished vertically, everybody is far and short. It should be 16:9, I think.

I don't think anything is wrong with the audio.