Feedback on Video Editing

[TheChatttown423]

Hello people, I am just now getting into video editing and photography. I have recently done a video for some classmates of mine and would like for you all to view it and give feedback on the editing and overall quality.
Here is a link to the video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4hVmbJv54o0

Thank You,

[hech54]

Hello people, I am just now getting into video editing and photography. I have recently done a video for some classmates of mine and would like for you all to view it and give feedback on the editing and overall quality.
Here is a link to the video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4hVmbJv54o0

Thank You,

Oh Boy.....yet another 1st time poster trying to get hits on his YouTube video.

[TheChatttown423]

Hello people, I am just now getting into video editing and photography. I have recently done a video for some classmates of mine and would like for you all to view it and give feedback on the editing and overall quality.
Here is a link to the video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4hVmbJv54o0

Thank You,

Oh Boy.....yet another 1st time poster trying to get hits on his YouTube video.

That's not true. If that was the case I would just buy them like all these other people sometimes do, but thats not the case here.