Need feedback on my time travel short film

[Harry Cross]

Hi guys this is a video that I made for my A2 Media college course.

Just looking for some feedback on what people might like about it / what they think could be improved.

Youtube link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8PS1ET43kF0

Thanks a lot.

[humpyco]

Interesting and I liked it. Editing, video, acting are done well. Choice of music was perfect. For a story in 13 minutes it wrapped up the plot points but one. Who was murdered and how? Or did I miss something?

An extra 20 seconds or so of quick flashes of robberies and a gunshot, person falling? Just a thought.

[Harry Cross]

Thanks for the response. And yes you are correct, that plot point isn't actually covered, only implied.

It is there simply to open the doors to a possible prequel film which would take place between the two different time periods shown in the film.