Editing advice - Video Competition Submission

[ryanstarrett]

Hey there,

Have made an entry into a video competition and would like thoughts on what I could do better? We were not able to take a slider or anything, which I think is my immediate area for improved shots? Post your thoughts please, this is my first competition! If you like it, please do so on Vimeo, if you really like it please share also??

Would love technical advice also, use of lens, positioning/angles, editing, music etc.




http://vimeo.com/169758731

or

http://bit.ly/mymtblife

[redwudz]

ryanstarrett, Do not post the same topic on several forums.
Please do not cross post, once is enough.

Continue in: https://forum.videohelp.com/threads/379010-Please-Review-my-Video-Competition-Submission

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