Video needs criticism!

[closefm]

Hello! I've made this video for "Play Fifa for Playstation" competition - http://www.electronicarts.ru/news/58478/ (it's Russian comp.) criticism welcome!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qg-6PRm_bhQ

[lordsmurf]

Cut the last 5 seconds, it's really not needed.

Everything else seems pretty much perfect to me. And I don't say something like that very often. Really, job well done.

[closefm]

Probably, the work will look better without sleeping boy.. thank you! =)

[M Bruner]

I respectfully disagree. Perhaps the boy should be sent to do his homework instead?

[lordsmurf]

It's probably summer time -- no homework.

[M Bruner]

I respectfully disagree. Big ol' book bag in the first scene, and a bedtime? Definitely during the school year.

[closefm]

He could come from soccer training.. and his mother is very strict =)

[gadgetguy]

I couldn't figure out why he was wearing cleats to play basketball. I had to go back and re-watch it a couple times to determine that it wasn't a basketball, but rather a basketball colored soccer ball. But maybe that's just because I don't follow any sports.