Please visit the site that I created...

[puertorican138]

Can you guys please visit my site that I created and check it out for me, it took me a total of 7hrs. in one day to create it??? Also, please tell me what you think of my site, that was the 1st site I created!!!:

http://kingsofballin.bravehost.com/

[Defcon]

The website looks nice !!!! Too bad I hate rap music

Good Job !!!!

[puertorican138]

Oh yeah, please sign my guestbook too, guys!!! 8) :P

[Conquest10]

Pretty good. You might want to rethink your color scheme. I mean, you got blue, green, white, and red all in the page.

[puertorican138]

Conquest10, I changed the color scheme, it looks a lot better now!!! :P 8) Do you guys think I have a good chance at making money doing this (I'm trying to learn HTML-coding also)???

[puertorican138]

Do you guys think that this is pretty good for a "1st-timer"!?!?!? 8) :P

[Cobra]

It's certainly more complicated than the one I'm making just now. Mine is an overclocking guidance site, and it's very basic. Just formatted text and hyperlinks. I'm concentrating on an easy to look at and simple to navigate site.

Otherwise, for a first attempt, I reckon you did fairly well. What did you use to make it? I'm using Dreamweaver for mine.

Cobra

[tgpo]

Is the page written in Greek? I can't understand a single word on the page.

Nice, simple table layout. Anyone can make money with HTML design, the problem will be the saturation of the market at this point.

[teegee420]

Looks cool, though I'm not a fan of Ebonics in written form.

[Defcon]

Looks cool, though I'm not a fan of Ebonics in written form.

Ditto...

[puertorican138]

Looks cool, though I'm not a fan of Ebonics in written form.

"In written form", LOL!!! :P 8)

[jakol]

looks good for 7 hours work
if u want free web hosting try geocities.com, no banner ads on top, it floats on the side...but.. its closable, collapsible......horrible.. opps disregard horrible.

[freestyler]

Geocities gives you almost no bandwidth. If your site is popular forget about it.

Your site is crunk, woadie.

[Capmaster]

I personally think rap has the "c" missing from the word, but being objective about the site, I think you did a fine job for your first cut at it. It's a hell of a lot better than my first site

[puertorican138]

Thanks guys, anymore suggestions are welcomed!!! 8)

[Guest]

Too many emoticons. Just remember in web design the "one's good,two's better so I'll take six" rule should be avoided. Just because you have something available,doesnt mean you have to use it. Like the guestbook,I've always thought these were useless. Both as a surfer and designer. Well,good luck on you site.

p.s. I don't agreee with some of the other posts about the content/language. It seems you are trying to target a specific group that will understand this content. It would be different if you were trying to sell insurance,etc.

[888888]

The website looks nice !!!! Too bad I hate rap music

Good Job !!!!

ditto again