Hello,
My name is Joaquin and I want to start making simple commercial video. Here you’ll see the one I have done for a try and I was wondering if there is any pro or expert over here that could give me any feedback on final result and if you have any ideas on editing that could transform my video into a professional commercial video

it will be more than welcome

Thanks a lot! Looking forward your feedback and advices

https://vimeo.com/548904538