Opinion needed on a restoration attempt...

[takearushfan]

Hi all,
I posted a short while ago regarding some difficulty I'm having in removing cicadas from a soundtrack.
The attached file has both my before/after tracks integrated into a video that looks plain awful, though that's not the point of my experiment.
I think I did a fair job, but I'd appreciate some constructive criticism. Especially around the 28 second mark, the cicadas became so prominent that I couldn't really remove them well without sacrificing the integrity of the score, for a short while.
Let me know what you think.
Thanks