Anything I could of done better with Christmas video?

[TOCCVideos]

Hey all, great forum and website, I love it!

I am just looking for any advice before I send this round to our company.
Anything else which we could of done better on this video?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gq5e0VCRGas

Thanks for the tips, I think we have done a pretty awesome job though.

[filmboss80]

You're not too familiar with this forum, huh? This is certainly not the first time someone has tried to promote their business and increase their YouTube hit count by joining this forum with the pretense of seeking a "critique" of their work.

It's a good way to get a lot of "thumbs down" votes and negative comments.

Had you been a longtime member here, you might have gotten a pass. As it is, we have to assume your post is spam.

[TOCCVideos]

I understand,

Do what you must harsh but fair moderators of the site!!
Seeing as you might of watched the video, any tips Mr Film Boss before it gets taken down?

Anyway, thanks for your time

Edit: I forgot to say sorry as well, sorry.