Paper editing help

[Devanshu]

Hey everyone,

I have my final portfolio due on tuesday for english and I just finished it...the thing is, I dont know if its quite done. So if you have some spare time, and would like to read it and give me suggestions on what to improve, let me know. Its about 4 pages in length and is about how war should be about choice. Thanks, I appreciate it.

[pacmania_2001]

Send it through to my email (link is given above). I generally did very well at English in high school so should be able to give some suggestions and comments.

[Devanshu]

Sent. Keep in mind, this is a college essay. I'll take any suggestions you may have. Thanks for taking the time out of your schedule.

[Hatz]

Hey Devanshu........if I remember correctly you are either a English major or its for an english class......hence the MLA format you were talking about earlier.

Now if this is the case, can't you go to your English department for help. I know at my college the English department has people that will read your essays and correct them for free. This would be your best bet considering those people are majoring in the subject and have been around long enough to know what individual teachers like and what not.

Not that I don't have all the confidence in the world in pacmania. I am sure he will do a great job.

Hatz

[lordsmurf]

EDIT: Nevermind, that won't work.

[Devanshu]

@ Hatz, nope...Pre-Med Biology. But I can see where you might have gotten that idea...its just that I suck at:

1. Getting the paper started
2. Catching the little things

I know at my college the English department has people that will read your essays and correct them for free

We have a thing over here like that called "writing center" where they give you an english major or a retired professor for a half an hour to do whatever...I've been there several times but they're never much help.

[pacmania_2001]

From the quick look over it that I have done so far it seems really good, hopefully tonight I will have time to give it a good read over and will get back to you tomorrow with some more detailed feedback.

[Devanshu]

From the quick look over it that I have done so far it seems really good, hopefully tonight I will have time to give it a good read over and will get back to you tomorrow with some more detailed feedback.

Great...Thanks!